tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post266591500402798073..comments2023-09-23T03:16:38.622-07:00Comments on Fiction & Fitness: Anniversary and Luck of Irish BlogfestDawn Embershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-37323264755687998852011-03-26T22:49:13.271-07:002011-03-26T22:49:13.271-07:00Tessa - lol. Can't believe you missed it eithe...Tessa - lol. Can't believe you missed it either since I posted your favorite character. That's okay. I hope to post the rest of the scene soon, so pay attention. *winks*Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-36303641213473900512011-03-25T15:02:36.053-07:002011-03-25T15:02:36.053-07:00OMG I cannot believe I missed this during the '...OMG I cannot believe I missed this during the 'fest!!! (ok in my defense I was off to Paris right about then...) <br /><br />HELLO JACK!!! <br /><br />Poor Jack, having to take his boss's daughter along! You sure know how to torture the boy. I wonder if she behaves or not... I'm guessing not... ; )<br /><br />T.x<br /><br />ps c u tomorrow at the Nature of Magic fest, right? xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-16029406323315601232011-03-18T22:05:44.246-07:002011-03-18T22:05:44.246-07:00Tracy - lol. True. Since his room is boring with n...Tracy - lol. True. Since his room is boring with nothing really to hide he might have escaped better if he just hurried without concern over the lock.<br /><br />mybluescreen - Thank you. It is a snippet, you are right. I'm not much of a flash fiction writer, and this is a novel I'm writing through the use of blogfests.<br /><br />Colene - no worries. I don't mind a late comment. I'm glad you liked it. The blogfest was fun.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-18952899890782706152011-03-18T10:46:58.363-07:002011-03-18T10:46:58.363-07:00How did I miss you yesterday! I'm so sorry! Th...How did I miss you yesterday! I'm so sorry! This was a wonderful bit! Poor Jack!!Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-45876252137270092932011-03-18T07:32:12.965-07:002011-03-18T07:32:12.965-07:00Nicely written! Feels like a snippet from a large...Nicely written! Feels like a snippet from a larger piece, but still has great tension for such a wee-sized offering. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-435673733968461652011-03-18T06:40:16.338-07:002011-03-18T06:40:16.338-07:00See, if Jack hadn't spent so much time jigglin...See, if Jack hadn't spent so much time jiggling the lock, he might have made it out of the office before the spoiled rich girl showed up. Darn OCD and all the issues it causes.Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726858055689145824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-56973432067495707112011-03-17T21:40:44.292-07:002011-03-17T21:40:44.292-07:00PK Hrezo - lol. Nothing wrong with them for me. Th...PK Hrezo - lol. Nothing wrong with them for me. The stuck up business man just doesn't care for them. ;-) Nice to meet you as well and Happy St. Patty's Day.<br /><br />Jennie Bailey - Exactly and it's the one who likes to push his buttons, of course. heheheDawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-45687297770961037342011-03-17T19:52:09.326-07:002011-03-17T19:52:09.326-07:00Poor Jack! It's a bummer when you think you&#...Poor Jack! It's a bummer when you think you're getting the night off - but when you add the bosses daughter in, how's a bloke to relax and have a good time?Jennie Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02088195986628533511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-48128011842044709432011-03-17T17:10:59.160-07:002011-03-17T17:10:59.160-07:00Alexia - hehehe, interesting idea but no. Jack wou...Alexia - hehehe, interesting idea but no. Jack would be fired and also, he wouldn't do it anyways because he's gay. But I see where it might seem like that could happen. ;-)Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-76785518929030747972011-03-17T17:10:33.993-07:002011-03-17T17:10:33.993-07:00Poor Jack. And what's wrong with hippie partie...Poor Jack. And what's wrong with hippie parties??? ;)<br />Nice to meet you and Happy ST. Patty's Day!PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-82865364247157553092011-03-17T16:49:37.776-07:002011-03-17T16:49:37.776-07:00Ooh, is Alexa going to try to hook up with Jack? V...Ooh, is Alexa going to try to hook up with Jack? Very intriguing. That'd serve his boss right!<br /><br />Thanks for participating!alexiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07122487552931794871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-7265991303211615052011-03-17T16:18:13.335-07:002011-03-17T16:18:13.335-07:00Thanks for the comments.
Mary Vaughn - umm, this ...Thanks for the comments.<br /><br />Mary Vaughn - umm, this is strictly fiction. Just something I wrote today that goes along with a story I am writing through blogfest entries known as Cinder Story for now.<br /><br />Michael Di Gesu - lol. Indeed, poor Jack and who knows what Alexa will do around his friends.<br /><br />Susan Kane - Ah yes, the nice guy factor. I considered using the second stepsister but Alexa is just too fun to not use for this. The rest of this piece should be fun.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-81459202952234580482011-03-17T13:34:54.741-07:002011-03-17T13:34:54.741-07:00That's what he gets, being a nice guy and all....That's what he gets, being a nice guy and all. Just when he's ready to step out in his green socks. Will have to see what happens. SighSusan Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09834094675218254410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-23156711684351364452011-03-17T09:23:21.229-07:002011-03-17T09:23:21.229-07:00Poor Jack, trapped again....
I'm with Mary. G...Poor Jack, trapped again....<br /><br />I'm with Mary. Give them all a smack!Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926512147242886610.post-78004042137168950332011-03-17T09:18:22.411-07:002011-03-17T09:18:22.411-07:00So were you the PA or the daughter? This sounds l...So were you the PA or the daughter? This sounds like a memory post. <br />Great piece -- I wanted to smack all three!Mary@GigglesandGunshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350818228268801008noreply@blogger.com